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Holy shit. I did not see that coming. Really really good plot and please keep writing. Please. It wsa a fast-slow pace that was very comfortable. Nice work on that. ...

I liked it and I didn't thin it was cliche either. Can you pm me when you write the next chapter, becuase i want to be the first to know. ...

Okay, thanks everyone, but this piece wasn't really going to go any where from the start. It was just a quickie, you know?

Wow! That was a really cool twist to red riding hood. Holy crap. I can still feel the wolf's kiss. (I was thinkng of some one else!) The description was ...

8/10 It made me luagh. Don't know why. (on my pic, you need to read the whole takes a while!)

Holy crap. I need the next chapter. Do you understand? I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER! This is so remarkble, that I think you need to publish it when it is ...

Wow. Just... Wow. You've out done yourself once again. Awesome work, dude!

Ok, wow. This is just as excellent as Wrong or Right. Keep it up.

Wow! Ok, this is a different turn from what your other stories are like. I like it. I can't find any mistakes, but I really hope you continue, and fast! ...

I liked it, I really did, but the ending didn't seem to fit well with the rest if this poiece, you know? I reall can't explain it that well. Sorry. ...

Because cherries bombarded your left hand when you were an infant, causing you to have cherry cats in your left hand. Hmphh. How can dogs understand cats, but we can't ...

Wow. So sad, but excellently written. Your wording was up to date, and your fluency was marvelous. The only thing was that I was a little confused in the first ...

That was short and sweet, but it described the point perfectly. I liked the ending. Nicely worded and done. I do agree with bigbadbear about something though, the never ever ...

*exasperated sigh* I've told people already, that when I take the three steps ahead out, it doesn't work!

Wow. Although sometimes the use of too many unanswered questions is bad, you pulled it off. The flow was kinda iffy, but it worked all the same. Loved it.